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Name : Deni Puji Tri Utami
NIM : 2201408099
Rombel : 307-308 Genre Based Writing

March 17, 2010

Dear Mom and Dad,
It has been long time not see you. I have a story for you. Last holiday, I went to police office to make my driving license.
Firstly, I went to the police office and registered to get the registration form. I filled it with my name and other identity before giving it back to the officer.
Second, I had to wait for the first test, the practical test. In this test, I had to ride motorcycle in right way. I felt a litle bit nervous when I did this test.
Third, I waited for the second test, theoretical test. I had to answer 30 questions about how to ride motorcycle according the rule. I had to do correctly minimum 18 questions to pass this test.
Then, the time for taking photo for my driving license. I came to a room to take photo and gave signature to it.
After than, I went to waiting room. I waited for my driving license which was being printed by the officer. A policewoman called my name and gave my driving license.
Now I own my own driving after having long process to make it. That’s all my story for you and I wait for your amazing story in your reply

Sincerely yours,
Deni


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