MUTTAHIDAH
2201408103
Sungai Jodoh
Long timed ago, in a village there lived an orphan girl named Leita. She was a servant of Mak Piah. Mak Piah had a daughter named Mira.
One morning, Leita was washing the clothes in a river. Suddenly, there was a snake which approached to her. She was so scared of him but actually the snake was not malignent. He approached to let her looking wounds in his back. Leita was touched and finally she brought him back home.
Leita took care of the snake until he was more better. He was more healthy and become bigger. His outer skin peeled off little by llittle. Leita picked it up and burned it. How amazing!when she burned his peeled skins, the big smoke was arrising. If the smoke led to Singapura,there was a pile of gold and diamond. Then, if the smoke led to Japan, the various electronic devices were there. After three months, Leita became richer than Mak Piah, her bos.
The Leita’s wealth made people suspicious. Some of them, including Mak Piah believed that Leita had "tuyul". Whereas, another villagers didn’t believed that. Even they thanked to Leita because she always gave a help for them everytime they needed. Beside that, she also helped an orphan and others who needed help.Mak Piah and Mira tried to investigated Leita. They were curious where leita got her property in a fast time. Almost every night, he peered into Leita’s house to find the secret. At this time, they saw a big snake in there and Leita was burning the peeled skins of him.
Soon, Mak Piah and Mira planned to look for a snake like leita’s own. They walked into the wood and found a rattle snake. They believed that after this, they would become richer. Then, the snake was brought by them back home. Unfortunately, Mira was bitten by the snake and died. In Leita’s house, when Leita was preparing for dinner, she was surprised because the snake was changed to be a handsome guy.
Then, he asked Leita to go to the river with him in where they met at a first time. he said to her that it was a repay for her help to him last time. He changed his peeled skin to be a big house. They finally got married and lived happily together ever after. Now, many people called this river with “ Sungai Jodoh”.
After the death of her daughter, Mak Piah was realized that her greedy brought a disaster for herself.
Orientation : paragraph 1
Complication : paragraph 2, 4, 6
Resolution : paragraph 3, 5, 7
Coda : paragraph 8
Selasa, 13 April 2010
narrative text
Christiyani
2201408005
FLAME TREES FOR ALL
Once, there lived an old flame tree with the young one. They lived in the land near the campus. Their flower were made the view looked beautiful.
At that moment, there was a little child named Precious, a son of ministry of forest in that country, who always sit under it and talked to it. Pretended that it could hear him. However, in fact, the tree really could hear him though couldn’t talk back.
One day, there was a shocking news that the land where they lived would be used to built new building. It meant that all of trees there had to be cut off. Though it didn’t appropriate to the young, but it was really sad and moreover, it felt mad. It was really sad till looked wilted. It remembered the last thing the old said to it, the old said, “ Don’t be sad...all in this world, will be died, sooner or later...just make our life not only by what we do..but by what we give.”
The young still couldn’t understand what the human really wanted, they destroyed anything just for their own affair.
In the next day, Precious came to and sit under it liked usual. He felt that the young was really wilted and almost died. He didn’t want to loose it, his beloved tree. He thought and thought, and tried to understand it by pretending as a tree. “What are really i feel if i become a tree?” said him in his heart. Then....he found something..when he tried to relate anything which were recently happened. He smiled and talked to it, “ well, my dear...i know what you felt,,don’t worry, i’ll try to talk to my parents..to not cut off trees anymore. Yeah..if there an institution which fight to save the animals, why not for trees?”. Then he went to told about it to his parents.
Fiew days after, there was rules that no one allowed to cut off tree without any permission. Precious liked usual sit and talked to it, “ you see....now you have to be fresh..don’t be wilted.” Since that time, the young always looked fresh and promised to give anything that it could give to the world.
2201408005
FLAME TREES FOR ALL
Once, there lived an old flame tree with the young one. They lived in the land near the campus. Their flower were made the view looked beautiful.
At that moment, there was a little child named Precious, a son of ministry of forest in that country, who always sit under it and talked to it. Pretended that it could hear him. However, in fact, the tree really could hear him though couldn’t talk back.
One day, there was a shocking news that the land where they lived would be used to built new building. It meant that all of trees there had to be cut off. Though it didn’t appropriate to the young, but it was really sad and moreover, it felt mad. It was really sad till looked wilted. It remembered the last thing the old said to it, the old said, “ Don’t be sad...all in this world, will be died, sooner or later...just make our life not only by what we do..but by what we give.”
The young still couldn’t understand what the human really wanted, they destroyed anything just for their own affair.
In the next day, Precious came to and sit under it liked usual. He felt that the young was really wilted and almost died. He didn’t want to loose it, his beloved tree. He thought and thought, and tried to understand it by pretending as a tree. “What are really i feel if i become a tree?” said him in his heart. Then....he found something..when he tried to relate anything which were recently happened. He smiled and talked to it, “ well, my dear...i know what you felt,,don’t worry, i’ll try to talk to my parents..to not cut off trees anymore. Yeah..if there an institution which fight to save the animals, why not for trees?”. Then he went to told about it to his parents.
Fiew days after, there was rules that no one allowed to cut off tree without any permission. Precious liked usual sit and talked to it, “ you see....now you have to be fresh..don’t be wilted.” Since that time, the young always looked fresh and promised to give anything that it could give to the world.
Semarang
Iwan Darmawan
2250408004
My first experience to go to Semarang is very unpleasant indeed.
At that time I went to Semarang from Jogjakarta. I left about three o'clock in the afternoon. Somehow the bus speed is very slow. Even due to lack of passengers, I and other passengers are required to change buses in Magelang. When reaching Ambarawa, it was dark. When it arrived in Semarang, the last thing I hated was finally happening. This bus does not stop at Jatingaleh, but kept going toward the terminal Terboyo. Because at that time was in the road toll, so I can not ask the bus to stop. on the bus I could only surrender to accept what has happened. Because at that point I still did not know the city well Semarang, I do not know where I should go. Especially it was night. Around ten o'clock at night. When I saw a traffic police post guards and decided to sleep in front of the police post. I can not sleep because the area is a busy area, lots of trucks passing by. When morning came, I contacted my friends by telephone and directed to take the bus to get to Unnes.
2250408004
My first experience to go to Semarang is very unpleasant indeed.
At that time I went to Semarang from Jogjakarta. I left about three o'clock in the afternoon. Somehow the bus speed is very slow. Even due to lack of passengers, I and other passengers are required to change buses in Magelang. When reaching Ambarawa, it was dark. When it arrived in Semarang, the last thing I hated was finally happening. This bus does not stop at Jatingaleh, but kept going toward the terminal Terboyo. Because at that time was in the road toll, so I can not ask the bus to stop. on the bus I could only surrender to accept what has happened. Because at that point I still did not know the city well Semarang, I do not know where I should go. Especially it was night. Around ten o'clock at night. When I saw a traffic police post guards and decided to sleep in front of the police post. I can not sleep because the area is a busy area, lots of trucks passing by. When morning came, I contacted my friends by telephone and directed to take the bus to get to Unnes.
narrative
Eviana Yuni Afra
2201408007
Genre Based Writing
NO LITTERING
One day, in a conservatory university, there was a high tree which was so shady that every student in that university liked to sit under it. Near by the tree there were two garbage cans, the blue one was for anorganic garbage and the yellow one was for organic ones.
In the afternoon ,there were some students who sat under the tree. They brought snacks and soft drinks. They had a chat cheerfully.
While having a chat, they mealed their snacks and threw away the wrappers under the tree. Without they knew the tree was complaining about the human beings reckless action. The tree said that he had protected the human from the sun and gave fresh oxygen for them, but how could they treat me this way. The blue garbage can heard his complaint.
And then he said “Don’t be so grumpy, they do not know what they do”.
The yellow disagreed with the blue, and she said “The garbage belongs to us, I agree with the tree, we must warn them”.
The tree replied, “ Yes, they do not know that throwing anorganic garbage carelessly can caused them so many problems, for instance, polluting the earth, caused flood during rainy season, and irritating the green view of the conservatory campus.
Meanwhile one of the people sitting under the tree reminded his friend, “hey, put your garbage to the right place”. Then, the man who threw away his garbage carelessly was aware that what he had done could make some troubles. After that he took the garbage and put it to the garbage can.
From that day he promised that he didn’t want to litter anymore and miraculously the tree grew bigger and bigger.
2201408007
Genre Based Writing
NO LITTERING
One day, in a conservatory university, there was a high tree which was so shady that every student in that university liked to sit under it. Near by the tree there were two garbage cans, the blue one was for anorganic garbage and the yellow one was for organic ones.
In the afternoon ,there were some students who sat under the tree. They brought snacks and soft drinks. They had a chat cheerfully.
While having a chat, they mealed their snacks and threw away the wrappers under the tree. Without they knew the tree was complaining about the human beings reckless action. The tree said that he had protected the human from the sun and gave fresh oxygen for them, but how could they treat me this way. The blue garbage can heard his complaint.
And then he said “Don’t be so grumpy, they do not know what they do”.
The yellow disagreed with the blue, and she said “The garbage belongs to us, I agree with the tree, we must warn them”.
The tree replied, “ Yes, they do not know that throwing anorganic garbage carelessly can caused them so many problems, for instance, polluting the earth, caused flood during rainy season, and irritating the green view of the conservatory campus.
Meanwhile one of the people sitting under the tree reminded his friend, “hey, put your garbage to the right place”. Then, the man who threw away his garbage carelessly was aware that what he had done could make some troubles. After that he took the garbage and put it to the garbage can.
From that day he promised that he didn’t want to litter anymore and miraculously the tree grew bigger and bigger.
Fairy and The Young Prince
Name : Indra Agrianto Kurniawan
SRN : 2201408049
Once upon a time there was a young prince lived in his castle. Although he was a handsome boy, but he had a bad habit. He threw the rubbish as he wanted.
One day when he finished his breakfast, he threw the rubbish near a beautiful lake, suddenly he heard some body cried from the lake. And than a lightning flied appeared and a beautiful fairy came and said that she was very disappointed with the young price, because his habitual.
The fairy was angry and curse the prince to be a little fish and she said that the prince cold be a human again if he succeed to passed the fairy task. She wanted the prince to take the rubbish from the bottom of the lake till the lake cleaned again. One year latter the lake became beautiful like before. After that the fairy called the young prince from the lake and returned him to be a human.
It made the young prince realized that his habit is really wrong, so he got the lesson that he must protected the environment, and didn’t threw the rubbish as he wanted again.
SRN : 2201408049
Once upon a time there was a young prince lived in his castle. Although he was a handsome boy, but he had a bad habit. He threw the rubbish as he wanted.
One day when he finished his breakfast, he threw the rubbish near a beautiful lake, suddenly he heard some body cried from the lake. And than a lightning flied appeared and a beautiful fairy came and said that she was very disappointed with the young price, because his habitual.
The fairy was angry and curse the prince to be a little fish and she said that the prince cold be a human again if he succeed to passed the fairy task. She wanted the prince to take the rubbish from the bottom of the lake till the lake cleaned again. One year latter the lake became beautiful like before. After that the fairy called the young prince from the lake and returned him to be a human.
It made the young prince realized that his habit is really wrong, so he got the lesson that he must protected the environment, and didn’t threw the rubbish as he wanted again.
GBW narrative text
A TRIP TO LUGENDING
Once, I was an elementary school student who had gone to my grand parents’ house in Kebumen with my mother in case of visiting them because my mother missed them so much.
One day, when I was there, I was invited by my aunt to have a trip to the beach. I was so happy because it was the first time I went to the beach. Then, without thinking any longer, I decided to go and we were going to Lugending Beach or Pantai Ayah by car. It was my uncle’s car and we were 9 persons who were in it. Along the journey, I was joking with my cousins and I did not realize that we had arrived at the beach! I remembered some of the scenery along the journey, it was so green and there was such kind of rock that so big and I wondered why there was a big rock here, in the coast, because in my mind, a beach should had a hot weather and blue!
After getting off from the car, I was so surprised because all I saw was white! No blue! Then, because of my curiosity, I ran toward the beach and hey….that was the beach! I saw blue water in front of my eyes! What a beautiful scenery.. I could not wait to reach the water and played in it as long as I liked. But, suddenly I heard a voice, actually it was a scream that was asking for a help from a woman.
“Help..help…”, screamed the woman.
I looked around and I found that the woman pointed to something in the middle of the sea. Ah.. I saw a child who was dragged by the wave toward the middle of the sea. What a poor.. Then I told my uncle and he, all of sudden, ran and swam toward the boy and saved him. Some people came to help my uncle too and they succeeded save him.
After having the first aid, this little boy was picked up to the nearest hospital to have a medication. I was so pleased that my uncle succeeded save him because I was afraid of thinking that this boy would die if he could not be on time saving him.
From this experience, I can learn something, we should be careful when we are in the beach because although it is a nice place to visit, we should be aware of the danger that may come every time, everywhere.
Sri Suswanti
2201408043
Once, I was an elementary school student who had gone to my grand parents’ house in Kebumen with my mother in case of visiting them because my mother missed them so much.
One day, when I was there, I was invited by my aunt to have a trip to the beach. I was so happy because it was the first time I went to the beach. Then, without thinking any longer, I decided to go and we were going to Lugending Beach or Pantai Ayah by car. It was my uncle’s car and we were 9 persons who were in it. Along the journey, I was joking with my cousins and I did not realize that we had arrived at the beach! I remembered some of the scenery along the journey, it was so green and there was such kind of rock that so big and I wondered why there was a big rock here, in the coast, because in my mind, a beach should had a hot weather and blue!
After getting off from the car, I was so surprised because all I saw was white! No blue! Then, because of my curiosity, I ran toward the beach and hey….that was the beach! I saw blue water in front of my eyes! What a beautiful scenery.. I could not wait to reach the water and played in it as long as I liked. But, suddenly I heard a voice, actually it was a scream that was asking for a help from a woman.
“Help..help…”, screamed the woman.
I looked around and I found that the woman pointed to something in the middle of the sea. Ah.. I saw a child who was dragged by the wave toward the middle of the sea. What a poor.. Then I told my uncle and he, all of sudden, ran and swam toward the boy and saved him. Some people came to help my uncle too and they succeeded save him.
After having the first aid, this little boy was picked up to the nearest hospital to have a medication. I was so pleased that my uncle succeeded save him because I was afraid of thinking that this boy would die if he could not be on time saving him.
From this experience, I can learn something, we should be careful when we are in the beach because although it is a nice place to visit, we should be aware of the danger that may come every time, everywhere.
Sri Suswanti
2201408043
The Intelligence
Long time ago, in forest a buffalo and a farmer lived happily. One day a wolf saw the farmer and his buffalo were working in the field. The wolf very surprised to see a big animal listened to a small human. The wolf wanted to know more about the big animal, a buffalo and the small human, a farmer.
The next day, after the farmer went home, the wolf spoke to the buffalo, “ you are so big and strong, friend. Why do you do everything the farmer tells you ? “. The buffalo answered, ”Oh, the man is very intelligent and smart”. The wolf asked, “ can you tell me how intelligent he is? “. “ No, I can’t tell you “,said the buffalo. “ But you can ask him “, the buffalo added.
So, the next day, the wolf asked to the farmer. “ Hi, small farmer. Can I see your intelligence? “. Then, the farmer answered, “ Okay, at home “. “ Can you go and get it? “, The wolf said. “ yes certainly. But, I’m afraid you will kill my buffalo when I’m gone, can I tie you to a tree ? “, asked the farmer. “ sure “, the wolf answered. After the farmer tied the wolf to the tree, he didn’t go home to get his intelligence. But, he took his plough and hit the wolf. Then said, “ Now, you know about my intelligence “.
•Orientation : Introducing specific participants ; farmer, the buffalo and the wolf.
•Complication : Revealing a series crisis ; the wolf wanted to know more about the farmer and the buffalo, the wolf wanted to know about the farmer’s intelligence.
•Resolution : The crisis is resolved, the farmer hit the wolf.
The next day, after the farmer went home, the wolf spoke to the buffalo, “ you are so big and strong, friend. Why do you do everything the farmer tells you ? “. The buffalo answered, ”Oh, the man is very intelligent and smart”. The wolf asked, “ can you tell me how intelligent he is? “. “ No, I can’t tell you “,said the buffalo. “ But you can ask him “, the buffalo added.
So, the next day, the wolf asked to the farmer. “ Hi, small farmer. Can I see your intelligence? “. Then, the farmer answered, “ Okay, at home “. “ Can you go and get it? “, The wolf said. “ yes certainly. But, I’m afraid you will kill my buffalo when I’m gone, can I tie you to a tree ? “, asked the farmer. “ sure “, the wolf answered. After the farmer tied the wolf to the tree, he didn’t go home to get his intelligence. But, he took his plough and hit the wolf. Then said, “ Now, you know about my intelligence “.
- Generic Structure
•Orientation : Introducing specific participants ; farmer, the buffalo and the wolf.
•Complication : Revealing a series crisis ; the wolf wanted to know more about the farmer and the buffalo, the wolf wanted to know about the farmer’s intelligence.
•Resolution : The crisis is resolved, the farmer hit the wolf.
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